[Content]: Example — Update User Welcome intro wording

[scotwells]

Note

This is an example of a well-filled-out wording change request, so you can see what good detail looks like when writing your own. It's not a real request — please don't close it or merge its linked PR.

Which email template?

User Welcome

What should change?

Current wording: "Datum is building for a future that is evolving in front of our eyes, so we're shipping updates all the time."
Desired wording: "Datum is building for a future that's evolving fast, so we're shipping updates constantly."

Why is this change needed?

Tightens the opening sentence so it reads more confidently and is easier to skim.

Deadline or urgency

None.

[datum-email-designer]

Hi @scotwells — the wording update for the User Welcome email is ready for the GTM team to review: #65

The PR shows the before/after text so you can check it at a glance.

[datum-email-designer]

Hi @scotwells — I've opened a PR with this wording change: #68

It's ready for the GTM team to review and merge. Thanks!

[datum-email-designer]

Hi @scotwells — I've opened a PR with this wording update: #71

It's ready for the GTM team to review whenever you have a moment. Thanks!